Writing WS

Hello and welcome back to my blog. I hope you are all doing well. Today I will talk to you about my writing WS. First we had to get something out of our story's then we highlighted stuff we changed here is mine. Have you ever written a narrative?

Simile

Dialog

Alliteration 

Jared and Sir Landalot left the howling house and began to head to the harbor but first they must go through the forest of no return. Both Sir landalot and Jared began to walk with fear because no one has ever returned from the forest.

“My scooter is soggy” said Jared

“What’s a scooter” said Sir Landalot

“REPLY TO ME” said Sir Landalot

“No” said Jared

“Do you know what a scooter is” said Jared

“Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm” said Sir Landalot hyperventilating

They both began to walk into the fearful forest. The trees were like skyscrapers watching down on the men. They walked for about an hour before they heard screams from the forest. And suddenly a man jumped out and yelled.

“It is I the wandering trader I am as tall as a giraffe and as wide as a house”

“No you are not” said Jared