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Friday, June 5, 2020

Writing

Hello and welcome back to my blog. This week for writing we made our narrative plan and started the narrative here is mine.

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As Jared walks through the village with pride, Jerry the wizard approaches him.
“Your mum smells of elderberries” said Jerry
“What did you just say?” said Jared
Jerry said it again, Jared now annoyed asks why he is bothering him.
“I heard that there is a holy lance and I bet you can’t get it” said Jerry
“Oh yes I can” proclaimed Jared
“Okay then do it” said Jerry
“Okay” said Jared with pride
Jared looks around for a while before saying.
“Now were is this holy lance” said Jared in confusion
“The tomb where Jesus lay before he came back to life” said Jerry happily
“Easy enough, wait did you say the tomb where Jesus lay before he came back to life” said Jared now worrying what he got into.
“Yes, yes I did” said Jerry now laughing 

“Well were is this tomb I shall go with my comrades” said Jared with pride
Have you ever made a plan for narrative? 

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