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Thursday, June 11, 2020

Writing

Hello and welcome back to my blog. I hope you are all doing well. Today we had to write a small narrative
of pobble 356. My narrative was on giant squid. here is my Narrative.
“Some were in the middle of the picific ocean July 5th 1955. There was a fishing expedition with 2 men Robert 21 years of age, male and David 22 years of age, male. They disserpaird just 10 days ago and on the same day they were reported missing an oil rig heard rumbling beneath the sea. We have got government officials on the job to try and find out if the two events are linked in some way.” The unnamed man hands the other man a piece of paper with a line drawn on it by meciane, the line was straight at first but then it bursts upward and down again a few times. “These are the sound waves recorded that day” said the unnamed man again. 3 days later


“Robert” said David in a tired voice
“Yeah” said Robert in a voice not any better
“Do you feel that” said David looking worried
“Yes, yes I think I do” said Robert
Both men jumped up simultaneously on the lost boat and they ran to both sides of it. 
“Is there something down there” said David
“If something is down there it definitely is responsible for our power going out” said Robert
Then all of a sudden they heard the rumbling agein and a black shadow in the water started to rise up.
“What is that” said Davied worryingly 
“I think it's some sort of squid and it's coming this way” said Robert
David ran to the front of the boat and tried to start it.
“Come on, come on stupid thing wont start” said David

Robert grabbed a harpoon and went up to the front of the boat as he saw the large squid propel itself to the end of the boat. The boat went down with the squid.
Have you ever done this?

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